Guardians: Chapter 1
I am SO excited. I had almost given up hope for having this to you before Tuesday. Now that the final moment is here nervousness and excitement are on the rise.
I sincerely hope you enjoy the first chapter and come back for me. I would VERY much love to hear your comments if you’d like to leave them. Now….please enjoy Chapter 1.
Cast:
Raegan : Kimi Alexandre
Brad: Chad Henderson
Chris: Shua Mulikan
Old Man: David “Grizzly” Smith
Jessica: Jachelle Overstreet
Trace: Timm “Jester” Gillick
Promo : Dan Sawyer’s Down From Ten
Sound effects provided by The Freesound Project. Music licensed from Digital Juice’s Staxx Traxx.
19 Responses to “Guardians: Chapter 1”
May 24th, 2009 at 6:52 pm
CONGRATULATIONS!! I’m so ridiculously proud of you! All the extra work was really worth it. I know you’re feeling a huge sigh of relief but I hope you’re also proud of yourself. This is an awesome achievement – finally getting your fiction out there, complete with SFX, music and voices. It’s wonderful to hear it coming to life. Total Awesome-Alert Kimi! Congrats again. *hugs & pom-pom cheers*
May 26th, 2009 at 12:45 am
Dude, AWESOME story!!!!! Seriously, KEEP WRITING! I’m an aspiring writer myself, and u write AMAZINGLY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Keep up the fantastic work,
Viola xx
May 26th, 2009 at 4:54 pm
This is seriously cool! I love it. Voice is amazing too. Perfect pitch/pace. I especially love that the voices are all acted out by different people. WAY better than some books on CD are.
Is the whole story going to be free? Or do you accept donations for your work?
I twittered the link to this page!
Thanks Kimi and best of luck.
May 26th, 2009 at 7:43 pm
You’ve got me hooked. I like Reagan already, and not just because she wears short dresses with knives strapped to her leg.
Her voice is immediately compelling — grabbed my attention immediately. My only beef was the abrupt way the episode ended. Otherwise, I’m looking forward to #2!
May 27th, 2009 at 5:55 am
@tdog I’d be curious what you mean by abrupt. Do you mean you don’t like the fact that it was a cliff hanger or something else? How would you have liked to see the chapter end?
May 27th, 2009 at 11:54 am
@Rachel
I’m very happy that you enjoyed it. That means alot to me considering you run Bitten By Books! All urban fantasy lovers should go over to your ning group (click her name on her comment to do so).
Over all…this will be free. I would love to accept donations and might throw up a paypal donations button but it’s not expected of anyone. PDF’s may also become available.
Thanks for the support and the recommendations!
Keep the comments coming.
May 27th, 2009 at 5:18 pm
@viola thank you for the awesome comment. it’s things like that that help me go …ok so maybe i don’t need to toss this LOL
May 27th, 2009 at 5:21 pm
@inkgypsy i will never get tired of hearing you tell me how great you are LOL seriously…you help me so much dude…thank you *hugs*
June 1st, 2009 at 7:56 pm
What a great start. Can’t wait for Chapter 2
June 7th, 2009 at 7:40 pm
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June 7th, 2009 at 7:42 pm
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June 7th, 2009 at 7:44 pm
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June 7th, 2009 at 7:44 pm
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June 7th, 2009 at 7:46 pm
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June 7th, 2009 at 8:04 pm
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June 7th, 2009 at 11:23 pm
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June 8th, 2009 at 8:58 pm
Hello, Kimi
I am impressed with your story so far. I’ve been scouting around the internet looking for interesting new types of fiction and I’m an aspiring writer myself. I’ll keep listening.
June 15th, 2009 at 7:38 pm
Kimi, Sorry it took me so long to respond. I just saw your question today. What I meant by “abrupt” is that Raegan said, “I was not going to like what they had to show me,” and immediately you said, “That’s the end of the first chapter.” It felt like you needed some music or some other kind of transition, rather than an immediate jump into the outro. I noticed that you did have music at the end of chapter 2. Hope that helps. Tim
June 15th, 2009 at 10:11 pm
@Kevin Thanks. I hope you enjoyed 2!
@fractalconfusion I’m thrilled you like it and hope you keep coming back!
@Tdog I think I understood what you mean which is part of why I fixed it in chapter 2.
Thank you for the advice. I need things like that to make it better. 
But I love the praise too!